My only problem was when you asked for your viewers to subscribe.... this is newgrounds, there aren't any subscriptions. Whilst this is far from being a video killer, it makes you look more amature than I think you actually are. After all, a bit of professionalism will go a long way.
That being said, great video : )
In all honesty I was meant to edit the ending to apply to newgrounds (follow instead of subscribe or something), but I just wanted to be finished with the project :/ Hopefully next time I wont be so lazy :P
Cheers, and thanks for the feedback :)
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